Who is the ghost who did my writing?

     I’m not talking about hiring a ghost writer.  I’m talking about reading your manuscript and wondering where in the world did that (paragraph, page, chapter…whatever) come from? 

     You’ve rolled along on your writing for days, and then you hit a bump that made you stop.  You decide to go back and read over what you’ve written.  Strange sentences jump out at you.  It seems that someone else took over your keyboard and did the typing for you.  Your characters are clumsy, their dialogue is stilted, the scenery has lost its luster, and everything that you thought was brilliant looks dull.

     Do you stop and fix it?  Sometimes if it’s bad enough, you might.  Otherwise, it might be better to mark the spots where things took a downhill plunge to fix up later, and push on. 

     What do I do?  I hit the ‘text highlight color’ and highlight everything that is weak.  This way I can go back later and easily spot the areas I need to fix.  When do I fix them?  I fix them on those days where I am having trouble moving forward in the book.  I find that if I go back and do my corrections I can often find the insight in my characters or their motivations that I need to continue.

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Posted on March 5, 2009, in My blog, My books, Writer, Writing and tagged , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 8 Comments.

  1. I find it better to push through as well. I sometimes find it helps with “writers block” to go back and fix older text. It might not always be the perfect fix – but sometimes putting on a critical eye helps I think. 🙂

    • doggonedmysteries's avatar doggonedmysteries

      I belong to a critique group and they are great. They never let me sneak anything weak or poorly done past them. Which means I will usually do my corrections before they see those chapters. It also means that they will find every single thing I missed. 🙂

  2. I always get someone to read it aloud while I close my eyes…and listen to how it sounds.

  3. I think the text highlight coloring sounds an excellent idea and also the fixing of errors on days you find it difficult to write.

    • doggonedmysteries's avatar doggonedmysteries

      Not only do I highlight but when I’ve finished writing for the day if I have a vague idea as to what I want to write next but haven’t formed the idea properly, I’ll leave a note to myself in red.

  4. Same here. I’ll open a bottle of wine, start to think about the novel, stumble upon an idea, then rush over to the folder to leave a reminder for the following day. I think these methods work well.

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