Are your characters likable?

 

     Plot twists, bodies, red herrings, murder scenes, cops, and bad guys aren’t all there is to a mystery.  Your characters are the stars of the story.  Therefore, the characters need to draw in the reader.  They have to be likable or, at the very least, intriguing. 

     Editors didn’t like my first mystery.  No, that’s not true; most of them liked the mystery.  I have the lovely long rejection letters to prove it.  However, they didn’t like my main character.  She was too independent, too gritty.  They couldn’t warm up to her.  No matter that, her father and several loving but gristly ranch hands raised her.  She was a person they didn’t understand.  Their world wasn’t ready for that character.

     However, my agent loved her.  She worked hard to sell the book.  Willing to continue to try to sell it, I think she felt let down when I pulled it to write something different. 

     Several years have passed, and maybe I should have her shop it around again.  After all, since then the program Saving Grace became a hit.  Grace is gritty, tough, and an independent character.

     Could it be that editors would give the book a second look today?  One never knows, but for now, I’m too busy with my works in progress to rewrite that one.

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Agented Mystery Writer, Bull Terrier owner--I have one at the present time, Avid gardener.

Posted on January 11, 2010, in My blog, My books, Writer, Writing and tagged , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 4 Comments.

  1. What?? Don’t they know that an independent and strong woman is possible? I am very independent just ask my Hubby. They are crazy and were probably male.

    You go girl, give it another try and maybe you’ll get lucky and have it land on the desk of a strong and independent copy editor. 🙂

  2. And may that copy editor not only be female but understand what it’s like to claw her way to the top of the heap. I’ve read a number of novels where the main character is female, and those books are best sellers, too, so I say go for it. What I read of that book I loved. Too bad editors don’t have non-professionals reading the manuscripts and giving their opinions about the saleability of them….I’d gladly volunteer to read an unpublished potential best seller.

  3. Characters don’t necessarily have to be likable but they do need to be appealing and what is appealing keeps changing. You never know, maybe the industry was just in the wrong trend for you at the time.

  4. Good points, I think I will definitely subscribe! I’ll go and read some more! What do you see the future of this being?

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